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Thursday, July 01, 2010

New renku Issa & Sakuo

Milkyway[Jul. 2nd, 2010|10:59 am]
in cold water sipping the stars...Milky Way
冷水にすすり込だる天の川 by Issa

and David' translation.

the loneliness of travel soaks into my stomach
旅の寂しさ腹に浸みこむ by Sakuo

3 comments:

Devika said...

Sakuo san,

Long time...Good sets, I liked yours a little more :)

wishes,
devika

sakuo said...

Thank you Devika san,
I opened new style that is Renku with Issa.
You are allowable to added more renku after me

sakuo.

Alan Summers said...

I agree with Devika, although I really like both of them too. ;-)
all my best,

Alan
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