chrysanthemum blooming
horse-shit mountain...
one scene
kiku saku ya ma-guso yama mo hito keshiki
.菊さくや馬糞山も一けしき
by Issa, 1813
Translated by David , http://cat.xula.edu/issa/
all are happy color
and gorden color
mina shiawase no kogane-iro nari
.皆幸せの黄金色なり
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10 comments:
very nice, Sakuo san :)
evening sky
a field of white crysanthemums
i don't know how its like...or if it makes a renku...an image from memory just popped :)
wishes,
devika
sun bright yellow
slow lazy warmed days
Amaterasu smiles
yellow butterfly
sipping nectar...
a hungry bird...
planting new flowers--
earthworms wriggle in
the turned soil
much love
gillena
A Very Happy B'day, Sakuo san...I knew it at Tikkis' blog :)
wishes,
devika
Devika san,
thank you for your greeting on my birthday.
Your renku is full of poetic mind.
It's so beautiful.
sakuo.
Sandy san!!
What's beautiful word ! amaterasu!!
You make me very happy.
Thank you for nice renku.
sakuo.
Ashe san,
So scenic haiku like Buson!
I like your renk that is full of imagination.
sakuo.
Thank you Gillena san for your interest renku that is very fit to Issa's original as well as link to my 7&7 short haiku.
I enjoyed.
sakuo.
Eileen san
Thank you for your post and kind information.
sakuo.
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