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Tuesday, November 07, 2006

open lunch box

Issa original, 1806 Age 44 staying in Edo.
David translate
sakuo Renku Posted by Picasa

Haiku Sequence [haiku renga]

[ Issa]
山里は油手ふくも梅の花
[ Issa (trans.byDavid) ]
mountain village--
wiping greasy hands
on plum blossoms
[sakuo]
let’s open
the lunch box
[gillena]
mountain picnic- -
who needs
paper napkins
[Gabi,a German living in Japan]
haiku lunch
so many nations
under the plum tree
[Origa]
mountain village--
under the flowering plum
different birds sing

My dream comes true that sequential poem has been settled over time and space.
Isn't it real World Haiku Club?

sakuo

7 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

enjoyed your haiga; in the freedom of this mountain picnic site, who needs paper napkins

much love
gillena

sakuo said...

thank you gillena san, for your sharing.
Your haiku has given us good combination.


sakuo.

. Gabi Greve said...

haiku lunch -
so many nations
under the plum tree


Thanks to Sakuo and Gillena and David and ISSA !!!

GABI, a German living in Japan

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Origa said...

mountain village--
under the flowering plum
different birds sing

Origa

sakuo said...

Thank you Origa san for your linking Haiku.
It is so romantic that I will add it to sequencial haiku lines.

sakuo.

. Gabi Greve said...

This is very nice, Sakuo san.
Thanks for inviting us all to your / issa,s plum lunch !
GABI
. Happy Haiku Gallery .
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sakuo said...

Thank you, Gabi san for your visiting here.
You have placed a nice word " plum lunch" that remind me " umebosi bentou" in my boyhood.

sakuo.