Issa original, 1806 Age 44 staying in Edo.David translate
sakuo Renku
Haiku Sequence [haiku renga]
[ Issa]
山里は油手ふくも梅の花
[ Issa (trans.byDavid) ]
mountain village--
wiping greasy hands
on plum blossoms
[sakuo]
let’s open
the lunch box
[gillena]
mountain picnic- -
who needs
paper napkins
[Gabi,a German living in Japan]
haiku lunch
so many nations
under the plum tree
[Origa]
mountain village--
under the flowering plum
different birds sing
My dream comes true that sequential poem has been settled over time and space.
Isn't it real World Haiku Club?
sakuo
7 comments:
enjoyed your haiga; in the freedom of this mountain picnic site, who needs paper napkins
much love
gillena
thank you gillena san, for your sharing.
Your haiku has given us good combination.
sakuo.
haiku lunch -
so many nations
under the plum tree
Thanks to Sakuo and Gillena and David and ISSA !!!
GABI, a German living in Japan
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mountain village--
under the flowering plum
different birds sing
Origa
Thank you Origa san for your linking Haiku.
It is so romantic that I will add it to sequencial haiku lines.
sakuo.
This is very nice, Sakuo san.
Thanks for inviting us all to your / issa,s plum lunch !
GABI
. Happy Haiku Gallery .
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Thank you, Gabi san for your visiting here.
You have placed a nice word " plum lunch" that remind me " umebosi bentou" in my boyhood.
sakuo.
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