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Saturday, October 06, 2007

clining to the wall

sakuo front verse
死に別れ独り寝出来ぬ蝶々かな
sini wakare hitori ne no dekinu tyoutyo kana

dead separation
couldn’t sleep alone
butterfly

Issa haiku 1824
ほっとして壁にすがるや夕小てふ
hotto shite kabe ni sugaru ya yu^ ko cho^

David’s English
clinging to the wall
with relief, evening's
little butterfly

sakuo back verse
壁は三月で蝶とお別れ
kabe ha mituki de tyou to owakare

after three months
the wall good-by to
the butterfly

5 comments:

Reflekshins said...

Sakuo-san:

Very enjoyable video and "collaboration" between you, Issa, and David.

Cheers,

Shane

John McDonald said...

I love these sakuo san
john

Anonymous said...

Love the sleeper's final smile..quite a turnaround.

sakuo said...

Shane san, thank you for coming.
Your compliment for collaboration is a great present.

sakuo.

sakuo said...

John san,
thank you for your comment.

sakuo.