Saturday, July 19, 2008

seaside temple

小林一茶 1818年
iso-dera ya zashiki no kiri mo tae-dae ni

David’s English
seaside temple--
the room in the mist
grows faint

by Issa, 1818 .

sakuo comment.
It was at seaside and evening.
The air is getting cooler and mist move up from sea.
Gabi san has suggested me the above.
The mist faintly comes up like a fairy creep up into the room.

sakuo renga.

1 comment:

Gabi Greve said...

This is a lovely haiga, Sakuo san!
You captured the atmosphere very well.