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Sunday, December 04, 2005

love also breaks

Issa Original
船頭よ小便無用浪の月
sendou yo syouben muyou nami no tuki

David’s English
hey boat man
no pissing on the moon
in the waves

Sakuo Renku
浪の向こうの恋もこわれる
love over the waves
also breaks.

3 comments:

. Gabi Greve said...

This is a great haiku !

Issa is the best !

すばらしい俳句だ!

サクオさんの俳画も負けない。。。

ガビ

。。。

. Gabi Greve said...

smile smile

great haiku and great haiga !!


well done, Sakuo San!
Gabi

Narayanan Raghunathan said...

Dear sakuo san, A great Haiga for a great Haiku!
Sorry for repating Gabi san's words. But I feel the same too.
Please check below where we have given a link to this Haiga.
http://www.wonderhaikuworlds.com/viewdetail.php?post=460&type=12