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Tuesday, August 19, 2008

back window


一茶 1820年
うら窓や鹿のきどりに犬の声
ura mado ya shika no kidori ni inu no koe

David’s English
back window--
the deer strikes a pose
the dog barks

by Issa, 1820
http://cat.xula.edu/issa/

sakuo haiga
Wife is busy at caring baby.

4 comments:

Magyar said...

to the deer
this lone dog bleats
an answer
_m

sakuo said...

Yes you are quit right.
Thank you for your comment.

sakuo.

Gillena Cox said...

i like the shift of attention, beside what is happening outside, the focus remains inside with the wife who has her back turned toward the window

much love

gillena

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sakuo said...

Thank you Gillena san for your nice comment.
Your sharp observation is very helpful.

sakuo.