young wife and old Issa

Issa original
David English
sakuo renku

1818, Age 56Fifth Month, 4th day, the first daughter, Sato, is bornOn New year his wife is pregnant with fifth month baby.

This ku is an answer from his young wife to Issa.

David's comment
Yokudoshi is an old word that means "to be greedy"; see Kogo dai jiten (Shogakukan 1983) 1704. Is this haiku a gentle slap at Issa's wife, Kiku?

rubbing Saint

Issa original
Issa( tran. by David to English)
sakuo renku

David's comment
According to Kazuhiko Maruyama, Binzuru is a Buddhist saint, one of the 16 Enlightened Ones. Folk custom dictates that if one prayerfully rubs his image, he or she will recover from illness; see Issa haiku shû (Tokyo: Iwanami Shoten, 1990; rpt. 1993) 223, note 1169. In this comic haiku, an autumn leaf has fallen onto the statue's holy head.
Sakuo Nakamura notes that Binzuru-sama is famous for his bald head, which people rub in hopes of recovering from sickness. Here, a leaf is doing the rubbing, "like a baby's palm."
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a crow a cry

Issa Original
Issa( tran. by David to English)
sakuo Renku

1823 Issa 61 years old, lost his wife and third son.

shell gathering in my garden

Issa original
Issa(tran.by David to English)
sakuo renku

Fukagawa was a down town district in Edo city where the great Lord and his men lived.
The down town is always people's town ,located in lowland.

big straw sandals

Issa original 1824
Issa(tran. by David to English)

sakuo comment
Issa was 62 years old, He has lost all his children and the first wife.
on August he divorced second wife, he was stricken with paralysis losing power to walk and speak .He visited friend by bamboo sedan.

sakuo Renku
moku moku susumu yomiti no okago
黙々進む夜道のお籠

silently bamboo sedan
advances night journey

Checking freely go through

Issa Original

David English

sakuo Renku

Grain checking station;

In Edo era the free grain distribution was prohibited.

So there were many checking stations over Japan.

New Years god shelf

Issa Original
David English
sakuo Renku

1821 Issa was 59 years old.
He already has lost a daughter and two sons.

David's comment
This comic haiku refers to the New Year's custom of visiting a shrine or temple located in a lucky direction. The cat takes aim at the toshi-Dana (New Year's shelf), where offerings to the god have been placed.
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everyday Issa: open lunch box

everyday Issa: open lunch box

country daughter

Issa original

Issa(trans. by David)

sakuo Renku

only reciting the Name

Issa original
Issa trans,by David
sakuo renku

1814 Issa 54 years old ,married on April

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Old Quarter Nihon-bashi

Issa Original
Issa(trans, David)
sakuo Renku
Honcho is the old quarter of commerce in Edo city.
It was busy all day long, near by it Ebisu shrine stood that
is a god of commerce.

new bride coming

Issa Original

Issa trans.by David

sakuo Renku

1814 Age 52 ,Issa married with young girl age 28.
They were like father and daughter.
For his long solitude life in Edo how was it delightful.

spring begins

Issa Original
David English
sakuo Renga

whitebait

Issa Original , 1808 age 46, living in Edo

David English and comment

sakuo Renku

open lunch box

Issa original, 1806　Age 44 staying in Edo.
David translate
sakuo Renku

Haiku Sequence [haiku renga]

[ Issa]
山里は油手ふくも梅の花
[ Issa (trans.byDavid) ]
mountain village--
wiping greasy hands
on plum blossoms
[sakuo]
let’s open
the lunch box
[gillena]
mountain picnic- -
who needs
paper napkins
[Gabi,a German living in Japan]
haiku lunch
so many nations
under the plum tree
[Origa]
mountain village--
under the flowering plum
different birds sing

My dream comes true that sequential poem has been settled over time and space.
Isn't it real World Haiku Club?

sakuo

funny female singers

Issa 1813 age 51, settled in his home village for inheritance dispute

David translate

sakuo Renku

Reference
御世miyo
Twelfth Month singers:
beggar singer who appeared at every year end in Edo era , wearing funny style, singing celebration song.

the local smith makes sickle

Issa original haiku

Gabi Greve translate

sakuo Renku 

happy writing on the snow

by Issa　years unknown
On the second day of the year, it was Japanese custom to write the year’s first calligraphy. 

outdoor theater

David’s English
like the bats
the nighthawk too
slow and sure

一茶
かはほりに夜ほちもそろりそろり哉
kawahori ni yahochi mo sorori-sorori kana
1824 age 62.

sakuo renku

野外劇場夜の幕開け
yagai-gekijyo yoru no maku ake

outdoor theater
opening the curtain in night

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leave the nest

David’s English
what day then?
all the hut's sparrows
leave the nest

一茶
幾日やら庵の雀も皆巣立つ
ikka yara io no suzume mo mina su ta[tsu]

by Issa, 1810

sakuo renku
残りたる者年を数える
nokori taru mono toshi wo kazoeru

remaining person
counts his age

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Mama's memento

David’s English and Comment
the child hugs
her cloth monkey...
hailstorm

Or: "his cloth monkey." Specifically, the doll is made of crepe (chirimen).

一茶
ちりめんの猿を抱く子よ丸雪ちる
chirimen no saru wo daku ko yo arare chiru

1813, Age 51 Second Month, he is living in Kashiwabara in a rented house. In autumn, his inheritance dispute finally settled, he moves into his family home.

sakuo Comment and Renku
Issa remembered his boyhood. He was motherless child, being teased. At this time he stayed in home village. There were nobodies who showed their sympathy for him on inheritance dispute.

苛められても形見放さず
izime rare te mo katami hanasa zu

even being teased
not let mama’s memento off


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visiting by ship

David’s English
"I see Mokubo Temple!"
"I see!"
ladies with parasols

一茶
木母寺が見ゆる見ゆると日傘哉
mokuboji ga miyuru miyuru to higasa kana

1803, Age 42 staying in Edo. His father die before three years.
Mokubo Temple was famous in Edo.
It’s festival held in spring and is big event.

sakuo Renku
川辺のお寺舟でお参り
kawa-be no otera fune de omairi

The temple near the River
visiting by ship

David’s comment
Issa doesn't directly mention "ladies" in his original text, but Shinji Ogawa suggests that the closing image, higasa ("parasol"), is meant to evoke "ladies with parasols."

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even over fifty

David’s English
do not think me
a poor-spirited soul...
mankind's spring

一茶
ふがいない身となおぼしそ人は春
fugainai mi to na oboshiso hito wa haru


1813, Age 51
Second Month, he is living in Kashiwabara in a rented house. In autumn, his inheritance dispute finally settled, he moves into his family home.

sakuo Renku
五十過ぎても我が家持てず
gozyuu sugite mo waga ie mote zu

even over fifty
couldn’t have my house

David’s comment
Issa seems to imply that, unlike other people, he isn't celebrating spring with all of the proper, expected rituals. ）儀式, If this is so, the third phrase, hito wa haru ("mankind's spring"), is ironic. Shinji Ogawa helped my translation by untangling Issa's syntax: na oboshi so = "do not think"; hito wa haru = "spring is the prime season for man, or man is in his prime in spring."
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black robe

David’s English
he rolls thin snow
into a Buddha...
the child

一茶
うす雪の仏を作る子ども哉
usu yuki no hotoke wo tsukuru kodomo kana
1813, Age 51

sakuo renku
墨染めの衣まといし仏かな
sumizome no koromo matoishi hotoke kana

wearing black robe
it’s Buddha

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whose funeral

David’s English
the year's first sky's
first blemish...
smoke

一茶
はつ空にはやきず付るけぶり哉
hatsu-zora ni haya kizu tsukeru keburi kana

1817 age 55
last year first son born and died after one mounth.

sakuo Renku
誰の葬儀や涙の正月
dare no sougi ya namida no syougatu

Whose funeral
with tears Happy New Year


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with Issa, Buddhist seminar

sakuo Haiku
一茶とも学ぶ仏の秋日和
issa tomo manabu hotoke no akibiyori

with Issa
study Buddha
autumn day

From 2006/10/16 to 2006/10/23,
I am going to my native town that is in Kanbara-cho, Shizuoka city.
for attending to the Buddhist seminar.
The Temple is in the town, named Kouren-ji and belongs to Pure land sect that is the same of Issa’s .

I have studied Tr. David’s book that is titled as Pure land Haiku .
I have learned high piety of Issa in this book.
I wish to learn the mind of Buddha with Issa and Tr. David at this seminar.

Blog will be off
.2006/10/16—2006/10/23

great Edo

David’s English
great Edo
from nook to nook
"Cuckoo!"

o^edo no sumi kara sumi made hototogisu
一茶
大江戸の隅からすみ迄時鳥

by Issa, 1825
Age 63 divorced with second wife. all his family died.
lonely old daddy wasn’t he?
But he said I still have Haiku.
He wish to state that to all men I am here,
keeping to sing haiku song.

Sakuo Renku
歌うや俳句身内無しでも
utau ya haiku miuti nasi demo

wish to sing haiku
even having no family

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parent and child

David’s English
parents and child
three in a row...
the geese depart

一茶
親と子の三人連や帰る雁
oya to ko no sannin-zure ya kaeru kari

1820 age 58.
Issa lost his dearest daughter in last june.

sakuo Renku
我も子ずれで歩きたや
ware mo ko zure de aruki ta ya

me too with child
wish to walk

let’s go dance of the festival

David’s English
the yellow gang
the white gang...
butterflies come out

一茶
黄色組しろぐみてふの出立哉
ki[iro]-gumi shiro-gumi cho^ no detachi kana

1820、Age 58.
Last year his first daughter Sato died. Tenth Month his second son is born.

sakuo Renku
神社で始まる祭りの踊りへ
jinjya de hajimaru mature no odori he

let’s go dance of the festival
held at the shrine

the childless deer

David’s English
giving up
the childless deer
sings no more

一茶
あきらめて子のない鹿は鳴ぬなり
akiramete ko no nai shika wa nakinu nari

by Issa, 1821

David’s comment
In other words, the deer doesn't bother with a mating call. This haiku, composed in the Ninth Month of 1821, seems to refer to Issa's own frustration as a would-be parent. His first three children by this point in time had all died.

sakuo Renku
亡き子を想う恋も忘れて
naki ko wo omou koi mo wasure te

remember the children passed away
forgetting love 

work hard at night

David’s English
at my gate
New Year's starts
at noon

一茶
我門は昼過からが元日ぞ
waga kado wa hiru sugi kara ga ganjitsu zo

1817 age 55, married before three years.

sakuo Rennku
大晦日にも夜なべに励む
oumisoka nimo yonabe ni hagemu

even on New Year's Eve
work hard at night  

Cool work!

David’s English
my hut's well--
I do its summer cleaning
by hand

一茶
庵の井は手でかへほして仕廻けり
io no i wa te de kaehoshite shimai keri

1816 Age 54, lived in Kashihabara.

sakuo Renku
暑い盛りの涼しい仕事
atui sakari no suzushii shigoto

Cool work
of the hot peak 

child and snowman

David’s English
first snow--
making a Buddha of you
is hard too

一茶
はつ雪や仏にするもむづかしき
hatsu yuki ya hotoke ni suru mo muzukashiki

1813 age 51, settled in his native village.
In Autumn, dispute on inheritance has been resolved.

sakuo Renku
降れ降れ雪や子と雪だるま
fure fure yuki ya ko to yuki-daruma

come down down snow
child and snowman 

pale silhouette of plum blossoms

1803
一茶
梅の月花の表は下水也
ume no tsuki hana no omote wa gesui nari

David’s Engalish
plum moon--
facing the blossoms
sewer water

1803, age 41, lived in Edo near Sumida river.

sakuo Renku
脚下の月や梅の薄影
kyatsuka no tuki ya ume no usu kage

foot light of the moon
pale silhouette of plum blossoms 

my side-field

David’s English
Praise Buddha!
my little side-field
has bloomed with rape


一茶
なむあみだおれがほまちの菜も咲た
namu amida orega homachi no na mo saita

sakuo Renku
ばれずに実って菜種はお金
barezu ni minotsu te natane ha o-kane

Fruiting without being disclosed,
the rapeseed will be money.