Friday, April 01, 2005

not very good to remove !

my hut's snow

David English
my hut's snow not very good at dying

-Issa, 1813
51 years old, On January the thirteen memorial party of his father's death , the negotiation of father's asset has finished. Many times he visited haiku friend in North Sinano. On June and July he was ill in bed for blotch .

sakuo Japanese
庵の雪 あまり良くない 末期かな
iho no yuki amari yokunasi matugo kana

Issa Original
庵の雪 下手な消やう したりけり
io no yuki hetana keshiyô shitari keri

sakuo Point out
[kesu] is far from [ at dying] , I think [remove] is better.

sakuo image
Issa has removed the snow from his roof. The snow fell to his half brother's side and stacked around his house. The brother always abused Issa's family

Issa site

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